Chris Walsh (chris_walsh) wrote,
Chris Walsh
chris_walsh

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Me rite gud.

I still want to write the shortest short story ever. Thought I'd managed that with "This shit was bananas." (Think about it.)

But! Then! I reminded myself I'd once written this:


Fought law. Law won.


See? Action, response. Cause, effect. A leads to B. AND IT'S ALSO FOUR WORDS LONG. Two sentences, compared with the one-sentence one, but! It has fewer syllables!
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