Oh, the second line is also the last line.
I hadn't expected that, but I realized it was true.
Though at the moment I'm working on a poem with the same first line as that one, and I'm trying it as a longer poem. I want to see where it goes. Maybe to a different place than the short version. Maybe the same.
They have provisional titles: "Short Form" and "Long Form." We'll see how much longer "Long Form" is...
