It's one of the poems that I'm needing to brainstorm further. I made notes. The notes don't work as lines, but I have to hope they'll inspire lines.
I try not to take too long on each poem, and except for the initial writing this has taken a while. Since mid-May, in fact, when I wrote down the first line in my poetry notebook while working on my previous poem, thinking I'll want to come back to that. I try not to write more than one poem at a time.
And likely, once I'm done with this, I'll want to do another one. I'm glad I do this more often.
